Sunday, July 3, 2011

Similies/Kidnapping

"It was like the split second before you step into a puddle, you realise it's there, but there's nothing you can do about it."  This was said by Kathy.  It's concering the time when Kathy walked up to Ruth and some of the other guards when they were talking about something secretive.  When I read this, I was able to visualize what was going on.  The similie makes the situation more realisitic.

"Then how come I've personally heard them talking about it?  Talking about how they're going to take Miss Geraldine to the woods in the milk van?  How come I heard them planning it myself, nothing to do with Ruth or anything else?"  Kathy said this to Moira saying that the story of the kidnapping of Miss Geraldine is real.  This will make the story more dramatic and interesting!

1 comment:

  1. Do these have a connection to each other? If they do, there needs to be clearer and deeper analysis. If not, they shouldn't be posted together.

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